Chivalry

Even though it was my prompt for We Write Poems this week, I couldn’t help writing another one for it. I’ve gotten so into the habit of doing those prompts on Tuesday evenings that it didn’t feel right not to. So, as before, the idea was to write about something that happened in five seconds or less; and this was a thing that happened on Saturday/Sunday at 4:30 am at a deli in Hell’s Kitchen, in about that length of time. I left out the context a lot to focus on just that moment, and I hope that made the poem more flexible in its interpretation. My thoughts on some of the significances therein will remain my own, perhaps.

And speaking of moments, Curio Poetry is still taking submissions! You ought to consider having a look at the guidelines and sending an email to curiopoetry (at) gmail (dot) com with some juicy tidbits.

And while I’m doing shameless self-promotions, I point your attention once again to Greeks Bearing Gifts, which a few enterprising readers that truly have too much faith in my writing (you guys make me blush much!) have already ordered. I wonder, would anyone care to do a virtual book tour? I’ve been enamored of this concept ever since Sarah Sloat‘s In the Voice of a Minor Saint, and if a few someones would be willing to put a review on their blog of Greeks, I suppose I could provide an e-copy. (Though of course, if you would like to procure your own, I won’t object. ^_^)

Chivalry

is not dead

if, in his berserker rage, the animal
should charge his way in through the deli door,
shuddering hands reaching for
the throats and breasts of blondes,
and

he should be met by
four or five lads with hair on their knuckles
who corral him with the grace of toreadors

(and one, with the kind of barroom judo
that only comes out
in this hour when Sunday morning can no longer
truthfully be called Saturday night,
flips him

easy as blackjack, or maybe
easy as bowling, into the drinks case)

and should he be
sprawled out in a jewel house of cans, bottles,
crimson, emerald, cobalt metal,

the air humid with alcohol-sweat, and
four or five lads ignoring his whines to be sure
his bystanders are unharmed: then,
the woman with only one hint of a bruise
pollinating her lip,

she has a moment to glide back a step,
regard with a queen’s regard, considering,
considering:

18 thoughts on “Chivalry

  1. Reads like film noire. Enjoyed it!

  2. mark says:

    So many snippets, phrases and joys in this, Joseph. Savory and flavorful…

    I did get a smile out of the flipping about…

  3. brian miller says:

    ha, i like…yeah he could stand a lesson or two…and if she smiles as he does…i wont hold it against her…

    got your email about dverse and submissions..will shoot you an email 2morrow and maybe we can chat…

  4. oceangirl says:

    I see the images, very nice ending.

  5. claudia says:

    great painting of the scene here…you took me right there joseph…and great site you’re building with tessa

  6. James says:

    Wonderful… A moment of violence rendered almost as a dance.

  7. Yousei Hime says:

    I love how the scene unfolds in black and white with only hints of shadows and complexity in your word choice and turns of phrase. Clever, fun, and shimmering as usual. ;)

  8. I love your characterization of those in the poem: the crazy mf (the animal) coming through the door, the four young men playing bullfighter and dispatching the creep…and the queenly air of the woman in the last two lines. You paint a brilliant scene in just a few short stanzas. Thank you again for a fine example of curio poetry.

    I might submit something to the journal. I just need to write a few more. :)

    -Nicole

  9. mareymercy says:

    There is definitely a breathless quality to this one; I feel the sense of urgency followed so quickly by the lull. Interesting.

  10. wayne says:

    i like this…nicely done and thanks for sharing

  11. Borg: it was more like Pulp Fiction when it happened ^_^
    Mark: really, the flip was very impressive! I wouldn’t be surprised if the defender did in fact have some kind of training.
    Brian: she was right chuffed about the whole thing. And yes, I look forward to hearing from you!
    Oceangirl: glad you enjoyed it :)
    Claudia: vielen Dank… hopefully the site will get off the ground quickly.
    James: a very drunken, full-contact dance, but a dance nonetheless.
    Yousei: thank you! It was one of those look-back-and-laugh things, because at the time it happened, there was Adrenaline.
    Nicole: please do! The submissions have only been trickling in, which is both good (life is very busy for the next couple weeks) and needs improvement (trying to generate interest).
    Cyn: my mission, then, is accomplished. ^_^
    wayne: thank you for reading!

  12. hedgewitch says:

    Impressive capture, immediacy in those visuals, and not a word wasted. I’ve been unlucky/lucky enough to have spent a lot of time in that no longer Saturday night zone, where life becomes noir and noir becomes life–you nailed it here.

  13. Joseph, a violent moment told with such grace. Not sure if that makes sense :) It was like watching a short film. Thanks for the prompt.

    Pamela

  14. Chivalry – not dead, the costumes and the manner of upholding the flower of womanhood changed – loved the jeweled “favors” of the canned drinks! Very visual here. Well done.

  15. zuzubird says:

    Hilarious! Loved it. Beautiful from start to dainty finish. “only one hint of a bruise pollinating her lip”–terrific.

  16. [...] “Chivalry” by Joseph Harker. Violence and the beauty of sure movement. (Be sure to check out Joseph’s new chapbook Greeks Bearing Gifts). [...]

  17. zumpoems says:

    This seems so American and has such a wonderful ending. Very well done!

  18. Hedge: I like that life/noir description, it really is like that. I usually love that in-between time, but it’s true that sometimes the unsavory peeks its head in.
    Pamela: thanks very much! A short film… I can live with that assessment. :)
    Gay: I’m of two minds about chivalry, but this event appealed to one of them, at least.
    zuzu: she was just so sassy.
    zum: and what’s interesting is that none of the parties directly involved were American at all.

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